Live and Die on the Beach

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In the interest of keepin' all this together and for those who might have missed it here is a link to the post I did earlier with the introduction and pro log to this story. It kind of introduces the main character and teases you with a little action and familiarizes you with the business of Bail bondsmen and Skip tracers (bounty hunters). https://smith-wessonforum.com/lounge/408362-writing-i-may-get-back-into.html

I will keep this going by chapters in this thread so it should be easy to keep it all together. I feel good about it now as I'm into it. One of my favorite writers, Stephen King was once interviewed and the interviewer asked him how he writes. He said that all he has to do is to come up with some characters and a general outline for a beginning and at some point the story kind of takes on a life of it's own and writes itself. You just get pulled a long with it to hit the keys. That is about how it works for me too. I hope y'all enjoy this.

Here a while back I posted the Pro log of a story I'm working on as I try to get back into writing. I been foolin' around with it a little so here's a couple of chapters. Lemme know what you think. And like before I know I can't type but what I want from y'all is your opinion of it as an entertainment. Thanks

Live and Die on the Beach


Chapter 1

It was a dark and stormy night. Yeah, yeah, I know, but it really was. The rain was coming down in sheets and the lightening was flashing and the wind was shaking Toby's beach house like it was a toy doll house. All the houses here were on stilts in case of high tides and sometimes a good storm could give it a good shaking. Just one of the inconveniences one has to put up with for the pleasure of living on the beach.

A sudden clap of thunder was so loud it nearly knocked Toby out of his bed. And to further enrich the experience Bo, Toby's cat, a 34 pound Main coon jumped up on the bed and started licking the gashes on Toby's face. A couple of passes with that sandpaper tongue and it was oozing again. Wonderful.

When Toby noticed that the ceiling fan wasn't running he realized that the power was off. He moved Bo out of the way and got out of bed. Bo was a talker. Whenever something, ANYthing, displeased him he was always quick to complain. And being forcefully pushed out of the way always displeased him. A lot of dogs and cats are frightened of storms but not Bo. He would park his big behind in the front room window and watch the lightening and rough surf, frequently commenting on the scene.

His next door neighbors, Terri and Traci, were in their mid twenties. Not Rhodes scholars but nice and very good neighbors. They were twins and Toby never was quite sure which one he was talking to unless they were together. He looked out the window and noticed that they were both outside with flashlights looking around under the house. Toby put on his slicker suit and grabbed his flashlight and went down stairs and over to help the girls if he could.

Toby asked, "What are y'all doing out in this storm?"

The storm was so loud they had to yell to be heard. Terri said, "Our power is off and we are trying to find the fuse box and get the lights back on."

Toby yelled back, "Your circuit breaker box is in a closet in the master bedroom. There aren't any fuses. This storm has taken out a transformer in the area and all these houses on this street are without power until the power company can fix it. Do you have any candles?"

The girls just looked at each other so Toby said, "Come on, lets go take a look." And he followed them up to their house. They found some utility candles and he set them up in the living room and kitchen and bathroom. They thanked him and told him that they'd be fine until the power came back on. Toby went home to set up some candles of his own.

Bo was not in a good mood. Still unhappy about being pushed out of bed and then being left alone. And somewhere in all this he discovered that his food bowl was empty. Mr Toby had much to answer for. You know how cats are. They are slow to forgive even the slightest offense. But fortunately they have a brief attention span so things usually work themselves out before too long.

Toby's face was hurting so he decided to just stay up and not bother with trying to go back to sleep. He set out a few candles and made a pot of coffee. Stormy times are good times to have a gas stove and an old percolator. The sun would soon be up so he decided to have a little coffee and then take a shower and Give Kip a call to see if there was anything interesting (read profitable) going on. And and later Give Karen a call and see if they could set up plans for dinner that evening.

The hot shower relaxed him and he decided to stretch out on the couch for a few minutes before getting dressed and making his calls. He wrapped a towel around himself and went into the living room and plopped down on the couch. Just as he closed his eyes Bo jumped up on the couch and curled up between Toby's feet, one of his favorite places, apparently willing to let by-gones be by-gones. Which one went to sleep first would be anybody's guess.
Toby and Bo were startled awake by the ringing of the cell phone on the coffee table. The storm had passed but the power was still off and property owners were out picking up debris on the beach and straightening up their deck furniture. In a sleepy and slurred voice, "Hullo." It was his best friend Eldon Tanner. They had known each other since junior high school. Eldon's family had money so he never made too much of an issue of getting a career or anything. He was a big guy, 6'4" and 270 lbs.

He was very athletic and muscular and had played some college football and minor league baseball and had some martial arts training. But about the only thing he did consistently and regularly was work out. He had a gym in his home and spent a lot of time lifting weights and exercising. He had muscles in places where most guys don't even have places.He was a good looking guy, all the more so since he'd let Toby talk him out of his mullet haircut a couple of years ago.

He hated salt water and the beach. It was the biggest difference between him and Toby. Toby was always trying to get Eldon to come spend a weekend with him on the beach. He just say, "No thanks." Then mumble something about all the sand getting in places that it had no business being and change the subject. He had been a Marine recon and small arms instructor. Sometimes Toby would enlist Eldon's help on some of the tougher recovery cases. Eldon was a little on the wild side...a playboy for sure...but he was all business when he was on a case with Toby. He was 100% dependable and in fact has saved Toby's bacon more than once.

"I just called to see how you made out in the storm. We had some wind damage over here in North West Houston. A little minor street flooding but nothing too serious. Soon as it stopped raining the water went down and the streets were passable. My condo lost a few shingles but no broken glass. So, the beach pad still up on it's legs? You and that lazy cat alright?"

"Yeah we're alright. The power is still off and by the was Bo isn't lazy. He's just.....deliberate. You know, Not one to waste energy. The beach is a mess right now. Lots of debris layin' around and the seaweed is beginning to wash up on the beach too. I guess the City will by by this afternoon to start pickin' it up."

"Well I'm glad you and your lazy cat are alright. How'd you make out yesterday?"

Toby gave him the short version and reminded him once more that Bo was not lazy. He had some calls to make and he needed to straighten up his own deck so he rang off and told Eldon he'd call him later.

Toby spent an hour or so picking up around his place and then he called Karen. She inquired as to how his face was doing and he told her it hurt like the dickens. She suggested he come over for a little more TLC. She offered to cook dinner for him and that was all it took. "Do I get to pick what we have for dinner?"

"Of course, like I didn't already know what you'd choose." Karen did the baddest pork loin anywhere and Toby's favorite meal was that with roasted new potatoes and braised asparagus. They talked about the storm some and Karen told him that she's suffered now damage at her home in the Houston Heights area. Didn't even loose power. He told her he was going to call Kip and then work a little more on straightening up from the storm. She told him as they hung up that dinner was at 7:00PM sharp. He assured her that he'd be there with bells on. He meant it too. Karen had little or no patience with tardiness. When she said 7:00PM sharp she meant 7:00PM SHARP.

When Toby put his cell phone back on the coffee table he notice that Bo was sitting in the recliner staring at him. Sometimes you can tell what a cat is thinking by the expression on his face or his body language but not always. This was especially true of Bo. He could be absolutely inscrutable and this was one of those times. About 5 years earlier Toby heard a ruckus on the deck right outside the front door. He looked out the window and saw two cats fighting. One was a regular size tabby of about 12 to 15 pounds or so and the other was a huge Main coon that weighed 34 pounds. His head was huge. Toby couldn't figure out why that smaller cat would stand and fight a monster like that but he was a game little guy, despite the fact that he was gettin' his butt handed to him.

Toby opened the door to shoo them away and the smaller cat took off like his tail was on fire, which it very nearly was. The big guy sat down, gave his right front paw a lick and stared Toby right in the eye. Toby closed the door and forgot about it. Next morning the big guy was still there. His opponent was no doubt a couple of hundred miles away by now but the big guy just sat there where he caught and held Toby's eyes....and began "talking". He finally stood up and walked over to Toby and brushed up against his legs a couple of times and then walked right between them into the house and jumped up in the recliner and curled up and went to sleep.

Toby was impressed with this cat and decided to let him stay. He was still armed on both ends and had all his "equipment" so Toby decided to let him be an inside/outside cat. He could go out when he wanted to and come in when he wanted to. Eventually Toby fixed him a little cat door in the front door to come and go as he please. He'd go and stay out for a couple or 3 days sometimes but when the pickin's on the beach didn't suit him he'd come "home" and spend some time in the house.

Toby had taken him to the vet and was told he was about 3 years old. He was examined and weighed and given a clean bill of health. He was at once fiercely independent and very needy. Sometimes he'd be gone so long that Toby'd wonder if he was coming back. Sometimes he'd sleep on the bed curled up against Toby's legs. He was affectionate when he was "home" but not really much of a lap cat. He was satisfied to be in the same room as Toby and somewhere not too far away from him. Toby was not one to like having an animal jump up in his lap every time he sat down so it all worked out to their mutual satisfaction. Their relationship seemed to be just what they both needed for it to be.

Toby was sitting at the kitchen table eating a cold left over piece of fried trout and sippin' a cold Shiner Bock when his cell phone rang. He looked at the number and saw it was Kip. "Hey Kip, what's up. I was gonna call you later today and see if you had anything for me."

Kip was quiet for a minute and then said, "Hi Toby. Yeah I got one but I'm not gonna pressure you on this one. It's a bad one and is going to be a handful for whoever goes after it. I'd almost rather eat this one than take a chance on getting you hurt...or worse. Do you think your friend Mr. Tanner would be available to help you on it. The money wold be enough for the both of you. But like I said...no pressure. If you don't want it I'll understand and even be somewhat relieved."

"Dang it Kip, stop teasing me and tell me about it. Start with the money."

"Well, The money's good. REALLY good. A million five. 10% of that even split two ways will keep you in fish bait for eternity. I...."

Toby interrupted. "Hold on Kip. You're not talking about Gilbert Mullins....tell me you are NOT talking about Gilbert Mullins. I heard you posted his bond and I couldn't believe it. I'm not the least bit surprised that he skipped but I am shocked that you bonded that guy. What were you thinking?!"

Silence. Then Kip said, "Go ahead rub it in. I guess I deserve it. I knew better. I didn't get where I am in this business by being stupid. I guess I'm now serving my last term as president of the Texas Bail Bondsmen's Association. But done is done and can't be undone. If you want to think it over call me tomorrow morning and let me know what you decide. I'll try to have some information for you if any is available. While you are thinking it over please stay mindful of the fact that he is charged with 3 counts of first degree murder which he is guilty of without any doubt. He's a bad one Toby. Crazy as a bat and smart as a fox. He'd kill you for a stick of gum. They don't call him the Tasmanian Devil for nothing."

"I'll talk to Eldon and see what he thinks. I haven't decided about Karen just yet. If I go after Mullins I don't think it'd be a good idea to tell Karen. At least not until it's over and I can wave that money in her face. I gotta let this eat on me for a bit. I'll call you in the morning.

This was all Toby could think of all during the dinner that Karen fixed for them. It was great but Toby felt awful about not being totally honest and he was also not quite sure he should take this one. Karen sensed his distraction and kept after him but he just explained it away by saying he was tired and his face hurt.

Chapter 2

Eldon was all over it. He loved to go out after bail jumpers with Toby. But he wasn't giving this situation due thought. "Come on Eldon. Think about it carefully. Neither one of us has ever gone after anyone like this. Not even close. This guy ain't no purse snatcher. He hunted down and killed 3 men in a most brutal way. I know you got your kung fu or what ever and your guns but we may be over our heads on this one. We could get bloody....very bloody on this one."

"Not to worry Tobs. Have you ever seen what a 230grain Speer Gold Dot .45 auto will do to the human head? I hear you bro. He ain't no choir boy. He's an East Texas red neck with a long history of crime and prison and he loves to kill people. I remember the case well. It was in the news for weeks. He went to prison over a robbery and attempted homicide of a police officer. His 3 partners got away and he went to the pen for 12 years. When he got out he looked up up one at a time and explained his disappointment in very graphic terms.

"But a guy like that is gonna make mistakes. He's on the run now and he's scared. He has no plan. He has no resources. I know we'll have to be careful but I know we can take this guy. We can get as crazy as we need to, we are already smarter. And you know I'm with you 100 %. I would never let anyhing happen to my little buddy. Karen would have my gizzard for breakfast."

'Well then if you're sure. And speaking of Karen don't you dare breath a word of this to her. I'll tell her I'm goin' on a job but I'm not telling her that you are going with me. She'd know that if I had you along that I was expecting trouble. When it's over she is going to be mad enough at me as it is when she finds out what the job was. I may even lose her. But with this money I can retire and go into another line of work. Get my private eye license or something. I'm supposed to call Kip in the morning and let him know one way or the other. Lets both be thinking about it and I'll call you before I call him."

"Cool beans then Tob. I'm in and mum's the word. Talk to you in the AM.

Toby was very unsettled. Fear and guilt were taking their toll. "I need to go fishing", he mumbled to himself. The storm was over but the surf was still rough and the bull reds and other bottom feeders would be running the sand bars. On a whim he grabbed a surf rod and took a package of frozen mullet out of the bait freezer and headed for the surf. The twins were fooling around on the beach when he got there and they wished him luck. Now that the power was back on and everything was okay they were back to being their usual playful selves. They both gave him a kiss on the cheek for good luck and he hit the surf. He baited up with a 5" mullet and cast into the gut between the second and third bars. There are 3 sand bar that run the length of Galveston Island beach front. Typically the fish swim the guts feeding on the drop offs for crabs and other shell fish that are always there.

He was so distracted that he wasn't really paying strict attention to his fishing. Just then he felt a powerful pull on his rod. Something big had just taken the bait. It was pulling line off his reel and seemed unstoppable as it headed out for the open gulf. But Toby was a very experienced surf fisherman. He had good equipment and knew how to handle a big fish. One thing is to have plenty of strong line on your reel and another is to know how to set the reel's drag (resistance to a fish pulling on it) Too tight and the fish might break the line. Too loose and he could spool you (pull all your line off).

He played the fish just right and it began to wear out. When he at last walked it to the beach the twins ran up squealing and giggling and jumping up and down. Traci asked him what he was gonna do with it. He told her it was a black tip shark and that they were very tasty and he was going to clean it and cut it into steaks and one day soon he'd have them over and grill it out on the patio. Have hush puppies and cole slaw and all the trimmin's. This obviously pleased them as they continued to squeal and jump up and down.

Next morning when Toby called, Eldon picked up on the first ring. "So, we all set then?"

Not surprised at Eldon's decision to go or his enthusiasm Toby said, "Yes I s'pose we are. I'm not comfortable with it but I can't think of a good reason to let it go. Are you all set? Got all your toys and brushed up on your Kung Fu?"

Eldon laughed and said not to worry bro. I got my two Colt gold cups my little Sig 380 on my ankle for back up and my Ar-10 if I need to reach out and touch someone and enough magazines and ammo to take over a small country. How 'bout you? You still stickin' with your wheel guns. I've told you before you need to get you a good .45 auto loader."

"I'll just be taking my Smith and Wesson N frame .44 special and a little 5-shot .357mag for back up. I have an AR-15 and I'll bring it if you think it might come in handy."



"AR-15?? That's just a noisy .22. Oh go on and bring it. Might need to shoot a poodle. You need to get the 10 that is a .308. One of them and you're open for bidness!"

Toby ignored Eldon's jabs and said, "Okay then I'll give Kip a call and then I'll call you back and we'll make a plan.

Toby's hand trembled as he dialed Kips number.
 
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Really Good im looking to reading Chapter 3

But i have some questions please feel free to ignore them

why is your leading male character carrying 2 different caliber handguns? A S&W N-frame .44 special and a 5 shot revolver chambered in .357 magnum.

Both of them are good guns.

But from a logistical standpoint wouldn't it be better to carry two revolvers in .357 magnum.

Such as an S&W L-frame and the 5 shot revolver which are both chambered in .357 magnum.

I'm just asking this purely out of curiosity feel free to ignore this reply.
 
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Great stuff but--I also wanna know if they served in the Navy and to hear some of your--er THEIR stories. :D
 
Chapter 3

Gilbert Mullins sat on a bench at a bus stop in Paris Texas, a small town in North East Texas on HW 82. He wasn't waiting for a bus though. He was trying to figure out what to do next. Since he jumped bail back in Houston he had been hitch hiking back to Paris where he grew up. He knew it wasn't extremely bright to come back here because it would be the first place they'd look for him. He'd have to lay low and try to stay out of sight in case the cops came looking for him. His old home, a small farm house on 10 acres of land on HWY 82 just west of town, was now abandoned. The house had obviously been unoccupied for many years and was not really fit to live in but he might have to make do until he could find his old friend and running buddy Mack Clinton. He hoped to borrow a few bux and maybe even a gun. He didn't really want Mack to run with him because he no longer trusted other people. Not any other people. The last time he'd trusted anyone he wound up in the joint.

As he sat there he was very aware of how exposed he was and was trying to figure out his next move. He decided to take a chance and go to Mack's old house where he'd lived with his parents as a kid.

It took him a while to get there but when he did he saw 3 small kids playing in the yard. He started to turn around and leave but he noticed that the oldest boy looked a lot like Mack. He stepped up on the front porch and knocked on the door. A frail, worn out looking woman about his age answered the door with a baby in her arms.

Gilbert asked her if Mack Clinton lived there. "Yes but he's at work right now. He works at his uncle's tire store in town. Won't be home till about 7 o'clock tonight."

She told him where it was and without saying another word he just turned and stepped off the porch and walked away. He was dismayed that Mack had settled down and gotten trapped into such a confining lifestyle. "I'd rather starve to death in an Iraqi prison", he mumbled to himself.

When he got to the tire store he found Mack in one of the bays installing a set of new tires on pick up truck. With a big grin on his face he said, "Hey buddy, Know where I can get a good deal on a new tire?"

Mack just stood there with a shocked look on his face. Then he said, "Man, what in the blazing hell are you doin' here? You are all over the news and the cops is a lookin' fer ya."

"Yeah I kinda figgered. But I need a couple a bux and a gun and you are the only one I could think of that might help me get a head start on the posse. I sure hope you can help me out."

"Help you out? Man you are gonna get me jammed up! I done a couple of short stretches in the pen and I got a record now. I also got a wife and kids and I'm lucky to have this job. The boss don't like me anyway and if he catches me talkin' to you he'll fire me and call the cops."

Come on Mack, after all we been through you can't just drop me in the dirt like this. I ain't got no wheres else to turn."

Mack took out his wallet and took out 2 twenties. "This is all I got. I'm 'posed to get some groceries on the way home with this money. Debbie'll skin my butt but go on and take it. I got no guns "cause I'm a felon and besides Debbie hates guns. Now you need to git."

Gilbert shook his head with disappointment and said, "Look man, I met yer old lady and seen all them little house apes. You gotta be miserable here livin' like this. Workin' sellin' tires for cryin' out loud. Why'nt come on and go with me. We could have some laughs and relive some of the good times."

"You're crazy man. You are poison and I don't wanna be no wheres near ya. I'm happy now. Got my life straightened out and found Jesus. Why'ntcha turn yerself in. I'll go with ya."

Gilbert laughed and shook his head. He stuck his right hand out and said, "Thanks Mack. I gotta go But it's good to see ya again. Good luck."

"Yeah man, good to see you too. Hope ya make it." Gilbert left the tire shop and walked to the edge of town. He got out on HWY 82 headed west. He thought about leaving Texas, hell, he was just a spit from the state line but he decided to stay in Texas. He knew his way around some and if he did cross the state line then he'd have the feds after him too.

Now he needed a car and more money...and he needed a gun. 40 dollars wouldn't last till the water got hot. "Time for me to git mean and git on down the road", he thought as he stopped walking and turned to face the oncoming traffic and put his thumb in the air. "No Problem", he thought. "I can git mean when I want to." And an evil grin broke out across his face. "Oh yeah", he thought as the grin broadened, "I can git down right unpleasant." He spent the next few seconds thinking how good it felt to get his hand on the three guys that he had trusted before. He showed them a thing or two, yes sir!

Finally a car appeared to be slowing down for him. It was nothing fancy but it was a clean late model sedan with a guy in a suit behind the wheel and nobody else in the car.

The car pulled over and stopped next to Gilbert on the shoulder of the road. "Where ya headed mister? I'm going all the way to I-35 in Gainesville."

Gilbert stuck his head in the open window on the passenger side and said as he opened the door, "Thanks, that'll be just fine." He settled in and closed the car door and checked the dash board. Half a tank of gas. That'll work.

The driver glanced over at his passenger and with a smile said, " My name is J L Barnes. How far did you say you were going?"

Gilbert smiled back and said, "Aw just up the road a piece, I'll show ya where to let me out."

"Well what's yer name sir, if I may inquire?"

Gilbert just looked out the window and said, "Joe."

"Just Joe? Well okay then, didn't mean to be nosy. Just makin' polite conversation. I'm kind of a talker and when I meet new people I tend to over do a little bit sometimes. If you don't want to tell me your name that's okay. Say are you a Cowboys fan? I ....."

"Uh oh", thought Gilbert. "This guy is gonna drive me nuts. I wanted to get a distance from Paris before I take this guy but I ain't gonna make it too far if he keeps on blabberin'!"

When Gilbert continued to remain silent and look out the window good ol' Mr. Barnes smiled and said, Okay Joe, sorry. You just let me know when we get where you want to go."

A while later they were in a lonely stretch of hwy and lots of trees and scrub brush on both sides of the road. Traffic was very light and Gilbert was getting antsy. He wanted to get rid of good ol' Mr, Barnes.

"Pull up here, I gotta take a leak."

"What? Here? Right on the side of the road? We'll be in a town in a few minutes. Can't you wait?"

"Take that little trail into the brush right there. I gotta go real bad." Mr. Barnes clearly wasn't happy about this but he pulled off the road and followed the little trail until in ended abruptly among a bunch of brush. The car was now barely visible from the hwy.

When the car came to a stop Mr. Barnes turned his head to face his passenger but before he could speak Gilbert put a straight right fist right fist right on Mr. Barnes' nose. It exploded and blood shot out in all directions. He grabbed his face and started screaming.

Gilbert got out and ran around to the drivers door and pulled it open and got Mr. Barnes out of his seat belt and pulled him out of the car and laid him out on his back. He was screaming and blood was still gushing.

Gilbert looked around and found an old piece of 2 X 4 about 3 1/2 feet long. He leaned over the still screaming Mr. Barnes and as he began jamming the end of the board down on the poor guys face and head he whispered, "No sir, I ain't now fan of the Dallas Cowboys."

When Gilbert stood up again Mr. Barnes no longer had anything that might be recognized as a human head. It more closely resembled 25 pounds of ground beef. He quickly went through the dead man's pockets and relieved him of his wallet and keys and he also was happy to find a nearly full pack of Marlboros and a gold cigarette lighter.

He dragged the body of the late Mr. Barnes deeper into the brush and covered the bloody ground with some branches and leaves and dirt. He put the sedan back on the road and headed west. About a half hour later he saw a Shell station up ahead and pulled in and parked next to the restrooms. He really did need to take a leak this time;

Inside the men's room he went through the wallet and took out the 113 dollars that was there, a Visa card and a Texaco card. He threw the wallet and remaining contents into the trash. "No need to get gas here", he thought, "I'll save the cash and get gas at a Texaco station." He began to relax. Things were now beginning to come together for him. He continued Westward till he came to a Texaco station with a Subway sandwich shop attached. He filled up the sedan and paid using The late Mr. Barnes' gas card. Then he went into the Subway and ordered two Philly Cheese Steaks a large Coke and a large bag of potato chips. He paid for that with his newly acquired Visa card. Aware that he was leaving a trail by using the cards he planned on getting rid of them soon and then immediately heading in a different direction.

"Okay, now I got wheels, a couple of cards and some cash", he thought as he drove being careful to stay within the speed limit, "but I still need a gun. I...." at at that moment he had a blow out on the right front tire. The car almost flipped over but he kept it up on all four and got it safely on the shoulder. "Calm down", he told himself. "It's just a flat tire. I'm sure this button down rube has a spare tire and a jack. I'll just put the spare on and be on my way. When he opened the trunk and saw the spare tire and the jack he got that smile on his face and whispered, "Thank ya Lord!" He knew he'd be alright now.

He got the jack under the front end of the car and got it up and had the flat tire off and the spare on and was just tightening the lug nuts when he heard a car pull up behind him. He had a moment of panic when he saw that it was a Texas Department of Public Safety (State trooper). The overhead lights came on and the officer got out and walked up to Gilbert. "Are you alright sir? Do you need any assistance?"

Gilbert's heard was racing as he tried to be cool and he said, "Naw, just a flat tire. No problem-o. I 'bout got it ready to go but thanks for stoppin' ta check on me."

You know how some cops just seem to have a sixth sense about people, well, something just struck the DPS officer about Gilbert and his twitchy behavior and raise his sense of alarm. Something...something not quite right about him...."May I see your drivers license and proof of insurance sir?"

Gilbert tried hard to keep his cool. "Well shoot, officer, wouldn't ya just know I'd pick today to go off and leave my wallet at home. Sheepish grin and a patina of sweat on the forehead and face further alerted the trooper. "What is your name please, sir? Do you have any form of picture ID with you?"

Gilbert realized that he was still holding the lug wrench in his hand and he freaked out. Without thinking about it he swung the lug wrench at the troopers head and caught him a solid blow just above the ear. The trooper went down hard. Gilbert stood very still for a moment as he realized what he'd just done. The trooper was wearing a Smith and Wesson .40 M&P and had 2 extra magazines on his duty belt. Gilbert took the gun and magazines and started to shoot the trooper but decided not to. He finished tightening the spare tire up and put the front end down and drove off as fast as he could leaving the trooper the flat tire and the jack and lug wrench behind. He realize in his haste to get away that his finger prints would be all over and if the trooper died.....well so what? He was already down for 3 counts of capital murder. He had nothing to lose by killing as many people as it took to stay free. When he got to Gainesville on I-35 he pulled into a Walmart parking lot and parked the sedan He then selected A Ford Mustang and broke into it and broke the steering column and started the car. He drove out and pulled into a Texaco station and filled up with gas and headed south on I-35. "Hmm", he thought, "time to start looking for place to spend the night.
 
why is your leading male character carrying 2 different caliber handguns? A S&W N-frame .44 special and a 5 shot revolver chambered in .357 magnum.But from a logistical standpoint wouldn't it be better to carry two revolvers in .357 magnum.

Such as an S&W L-frame and the 5 shot revolver which are both chambered in .357 magnum.

This is a very good question and a good observation as well. I am glad you brought it up because it gives me the chance to further describe Toby Hicks. Hopefully you will have the answer to your question after ya read this. ;)

Toby is 38 years old. Never been married and has been a Skip Tracer since he was 21. He has also worked as a private investigator and body guard.

He is 5'11" tall and average build. In fact you could used the term average to describe pretty much every thing about Toby. Physically speaking of course. He does have a very good sense of humor and he is very clever when tracking a bail jumper. He has a special talent for it you might say. This is owing to his ability to size people up and more or less predict what they might do in a given situation. A skill which has come in handy in his career.

He knows his way around most common types of fire arms but he is not anybody's idea of an expert on tactics or specialized tactical weapons. He prefers using his brain rather than guns but he can pull the trigger when he has to as I will try to demonstrate in the course of this story.

His choice of weapons is a result of his confidence in the Calibers .44 special and .357mag. Coincidentally he has a special affection for the S&W N frames and the little Ruger SP101 as do I. :D

Guess I'm busted here, attributing my own personal attitudes and opinions to my characters. I'll try not to do too much more of that. :rolleyes:

Please feel free to ask any questions that pop into your mind. I'll try to come up with satisfactory answers. :)
 
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